Friday, 4 April 2008

My poem "Truly yours"

Waves of the sea heart-warming
the extremityOf fondly affectionate people,
At the shoreline.
Taking the delight of moonlit & memories
Memories of admirers
Viewing the stars gleaming for you & me,
Crossed us,taking our lives,Towards our dancing days
These sweet & tender waves from you
Heart-rending me,
bringing us near,Near to each other
Sometimes the mileage creates intervals between us
but the emotional commitment
Bring us near,near to each other
See-breeze unfolds my untold charm
Feelings never expressed
Expressing our emotions
I know you are there
there for me
TRULY YOURS.
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8 comments:

  1. aMmAr5 April 2008 at 11:54

    nice blog sakina, keep it up gurl ;)

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  2. syeda7 April 2008 at 07:31

    thnx ammar

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  3. Anonymous21 April 2008 at 12:07

    nicely expressed !

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  4. Kamran27 April 2008 at 13:43

    oye hoye sakinaa the blogger!! :P welcome onboard!

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  5. Fariha Akhtar14 July 2008 at 23:01

    Excellent poem Sakina...never knew u r a shaira too :) Keep it up coz I can see the poetic germs in u

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  6. syeda14 July 2008 at 23:02

    thnx fari:)

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  7. UTP18 July 2008 at 07:22

    hmmm...don't wait too long...and if you do...make sure its worth the wait...

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  8. Asma3 August 2008 at 21:21

    heart warming words :)

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